F1 essay

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hey guys i have to write an exemplification essay on Formula 1 about 350 to 450 words.
But i cannot think of any examples??

Thats my topic sentence formula is, one of the most exciting, deleterious and the most lucrative sport to play.

but i would really like to write about something else

can anyone else make me an good topic sentence and explain what should I write about

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Nurburgring 2007 - a torrential downpour, a battle of attrition, a rookie mistake, an aggressive pass, a two-time world champion wins...

Brazil 2007 - a sibling/teammate rivalry, a dark horse, a technical problem, a mad dash to a points finish, an unlikely champion...

Monza 2008 - a nasty weekend, two arrogant superpowers convinced they know better than the weather, a rookie pole-sitter, a sloppy race on the calendar's fastest track, a new youngest GP winner...

Brazil 2008 - trash talking by a two-time world champion, intermittent rain, a conservative strategy, a semi-legal orchestrated pass, a rookie spoiler, a last-corner bobble, a seemingly-inevitable championship almost lost then won...

I mean, these stories practically write themselves, man.
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suzuka 2005

man wins from near the back on a dry circuit

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Monza 1971, closest F1 race in history, as well as one of the fastest, all on a classic track before everybody went chicane-crazy.
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As an ex-English professor . . .
Thats my topic sentence formula is, one of the most exciting, deleterious and the most lucrative sport to play.
Please look up the meaning of "deleterious." I don't THINK that's the word you want. (At least I HOPE it's not!)
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